Monday, February 8, 2010

That, oh that's America . . .



6 comments:

yogacephalus said...

Blue red and white

Ahab Cloud said...

Yup.

Yr. last offering. Please leave it up for a while. I'm falling through it often.

The best life you've written in a while.

The beast life you've written in a whale.

Etc. A few more days. Thanks.

yogacephalus said...

I think it's the best poem I've written. I guess if you feel that as soon as you write it, you know?

Whenever you feel up for it, you should post some of the new stuff you've been writing. Showing me those beautiful things you've been seeing...

Ahab Cloud said...

When's your birthday?

yogacephalus said...

Today

Ahab Cloud said...

I started a poem for you last night. A birthday poem. The first few lines: Sometimes to purify, we must blend. / That sounds about right. Almost / like a man talking / after four or five sips.

Have a great one, friend.