Friday, May 25, 2007

Untitled Southern Hunger

Anna and I made that oath beneath trees. Pinnacle
of July, 7th year, cicadas. Ousting everyone's memory of them
to hike root and bark, fuck, then drip twitching in

4 comments:

yogacephalus said...

Hmm... not to be ungrateful, but. I think we might need another try at the title. It seems to be aiming for the fences with a little too much effort...

yogacephalus said...

On the plot of "City of Glass":

a little too close to "Ghostbusters" ?

Ahab Cloud said...

Will work on # 1, and agree. Can't do much about # 2.

yogacephalus said...

Well done. That is the finest handle for a poem I have seen in a long while.