Wednesday, May 23, 2007

These Of The Soft Pitch And Maybe Too Random

What's irksome about these collaborations,
though welcome, is how little land they make be.

2 comments:

yogacephalus said...

This stuff is starting to sound dangerously close to bad Ashbery.
Maybe we should drop the rhymes and try to write couplets in a less abstract/ lyrical manner. Or maybe go for tercets or quatrains.

Ahab Cloud said...

I vote for tercets, less abstract. You can lead off this time.